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I’m A Failed Writer #1: Revisions

Here is the first episode in a video series called “I am a failed writer”. This episode focuses on the revision process. I discuss my failures as well as my (???) successes.

You can also watch it directly in Vimeo.

Oh. Here are some of the books by Jim Krusoe: Iceland(2002, Dalkey Archive Press), Girl Factory(2008, Tin House), Erased(2009, Tin House), Toward You(2011, Tin House).

Even though I credit Jim Krusoe for opening up this new draft/revision for me, there are other friends and mentors who have helped me see this particular project in a fresh light. To keep the video from getting too long, I didn’t mention any of these other people. I’m sorry about that. Here are some of the fabulous people (in alphabetic order, to avoid having to think of a less arbitrary order): Alistair McCartney, Cheryl Strayed, Ellen Urbani, Jason Sandefur, Joanna Rose, Kate Maruyama, Leonard Chang, Liz Prato, Merilee Karr, Sheri Blue, Stevan Allred, Tracy Burkholder.

Okay. That’s it for now. Thanks. Good luck with your revision work…

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I loved this video, but I'm not sure I could throw out an entire draft. However, my revision process pretty much re-writes the entire novel word by word, so perhaps it isn't so different?

Thanks for that refreshing look at approaching revisions - you've given me some ideas about how to go forward with revising my first draft.

So great to hear that the video helped you! Good luck on your book...

Thank you for this. I too am a fellow Antiochian, the Santa Barbara branch. I appreciated your story and your humorous illustrations. As an aspiring writer, they have helped my process. I've bookmarked your page so I can come back and laugh and learn some more. Similar to Amy, Laura Stanfill's page was also the way I found this site.

Thanks for watching the video, Darien. Hope the writing goes well for you and let me know if there are certain subjects that you'd like me to try and (potentially fail to) tackle... I'm really enjoying Laura's blog so it's great that people have found my presentations by way of her blog...

I love your blog, Yuvi. Months ago, I stumbled on it and found my way to Scrivener (thank you, best $50 I ever spent). And now, just this morning, the Pinewood Table sends me back here for some more Zalkow wisdom (via Laura Stanfill). I like to think that all successful writers were failed writers at one point, but that might just be me trying to make myself feel better. Thank you for sharing your failures (and triumphs) so honestly. Best to you on your continued revisions.

(Also, please say hello to your dear wife for me. We know each other from way back before the Pinewood Table had any kind of official moniker.)

Amy -- Great to hear from you. And thanks for the kind feedback. My dear wife says hello, with fond memories of you at the pre-Pinewood-table table. Also: your blog is fabulous. I love the openness and sincerity and humor to your writing. Congratulations on finishing a draft of your novel too!

I was also in Jim's Krusoe's workshop and remember both your original submission and the revision. You did a terrific job with the rewrite. Your video explains how you went about it and I'm glad that I had the opportunity to view it. Voice seems to be the most critical part, but it's so easy to get lost while developing plot and theme and all the rest of it. Now, I'll remember that.

Great to hear from you, Diana. Hope your writing is going well!... (And forgive me for representing you as one little stick figure.)

I remember reading part of the original in workshop - loved the guy with the napkins. Glad you found a way forward and am looking forward to the novel.

Thanks Diane. Good to hear from you. I'll follow up with you after 76 more revisions to let you know how it goes... Hope you're doing well...

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